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Sunset On Your Skin

Like a warm glow on a peach's cheek, your skin luminates, I feel the radiating heat. Mixed in with your perfect shine, our thoughts connect, minds intertwine. My heartbeat slows, it stops on a dime. Then it speeds up, like a running race to the finish line. I'm captivated by the way your face shines in the light, Looking at you, the angels sing, it's such a perfect sight. Like a comatose dream I never want to end. Your beauty is like a symphony playing in my head over and over again. Staring at your face, words won't seem to come out. The sunlight reflecting off your skin, is something I could not live without. When I'm with you, I anxiously wait for the day to end, so that I can see the beauty of a sunset on your skin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/12/2010 9:22:00 AM
Marvelous..luscious Title!!! I sure the loved one with appreciate this touching verse! Light & Love
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:04:00 AM
Yes you painted the sun comming to live in this one . Job well done. P.D.
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:50:00 AM
Really good. Love the imagery. it's pretty
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:44:00 AM
Oh this is really really pretty ^^ i love it! <3
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Date: 3/31/2010 5:05:00 AM
Good morning Serenity, I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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