Sunset

Orange tinted water
Clouds etched in purple and pink
Faint stars in blue ink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 26, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Rachel, this is a beautiful haiku. Your words had me visualising the sunset. One of the best haikus I've read in a long while.
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