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Sunset

Drowsy day shuts eyes  
Glowing eyelids adorn sky 
Giggling stars appear!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
  26 OCTOBER 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

October 28, 2014 at 4:18 AM

a beautiful sunset demetrios excellent vision

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 31, 2014 at 5:54 AM

Thank you my friend, Liam, for your lovely comment!

Paul Callus

October 27, 2014 at 4:50 PM

Hi Demi! Like the drowsy day I close my eyes and picture this lovely scene that you paint in so few words....like your friendly stars...I can see them as little happy babies! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 27, 2014 at 6:49 PM

Paul, thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 26, 2014 at 3:38 PM

I love how you have the stars giggling. I guess that explains why they twinkle. Another beautiful Haiku Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 27, 2014 at 4:53 AM

That might be the reason, dear Brenda! The point is they are pretty and we giggle with them! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Andrea Dietrich

October 26, 2014 at 11:55 AM

What great metaphors for night!! Love the giggling stars!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 27, 2014 at 4:56 AM

What poetry would be without metaphors, dear Andrea! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 26, 2014 at 6:48 AM

Oh it's so beautiful Demetrios! Nature has so much to give us,, we just keep on cherishing n fail to appreciate! How selfish we r !! Thnx for sharing!

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 27, 2014 at 4:58 AM

Absolutely correct dear, Dr. Upma! We should appreciate and respect nature, otherwise, we would be for a great and unpleasant surprise as I say in my today's Haiku! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!