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inspired by one of the contests here and the beauty of the sunset

Sunset

a spectacular matinee of glassy waves  embracing the cosmos’  charm in rhapsody





Dec. 12, 2013       4.45pm





Third Place
contest: One Amazing Line
Judged: 3/10/14
Sponsor: Poet Broken Wings

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Skat A

March 15, 2014 at 10:13 AM

Leonora .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux

March 12, 2014 at 8:42 AM

Gorgeous, congratulations!

Paul Callus

March 12, 2014 at 6:57 AM

beautiful....Swarovski brilliance! // paul

Bukang Liwayway

March 10, 2014 at 11:22 PM

wow so lovely imagery in one line...Congrats on your win my dear friend Leonora :) hugssss..

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2014 at 5:03 PM

so descriptive , Leonora. BIG congrats for your win, sweetie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 4:47 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Leonora ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2013 at 3:47 AM

hello my sweetest sis... I'm up right now... Thank you Thank you very much for the Christams gift... You are amazing... Sending many hugs.... Love the bracelet, so much.. xox...LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

December 23, 2013 at 12:47 AM

thanks for coming to visit me so I could see this poem of yours. I just am so busy these days. And I see you have another brand new one i have not seen. Yay!! I'm going to it now.

Poet Destroyer A

December 19, 2013 at 6:14 PM

I love it I love it... SIS... One monoku, analyzing it all. Rather unique in every way. ...I am charmed by the way the sun sets every day... A #1 line... your BFF...LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

December 16, 2013 at 4:28 AM

A symphony in just a few words, magnificent!

Bukang Liwayway

December 14, 2013 at 12:27 PM

Whoa!! what a great Monoku...super like talaga. you're such a great poet. you are one of my Idol here on PS. Advance Merry Christmas to you and to your family. God bless you always and thanks for your very nice comments on my poems....mwuah!! :)

Nette Onclaud

December 14, 2013 at 11:41 AM

dear lorrie, what a descriptive outpour of images wafting sweet rhapsody of sunset!.. beautifully crafted, best friend!... you are awesome.. hope to see you soon.. holiday's best with warm huggs!

Bl Devnath

December 14, 2013 at 10:14 AM

A charming monoku that reflects in many ways of life philosophically worded, I smell here. Spectacular is certainly of nice colorful glasses. Wish you the best in the contest, my lovely friend. Sorry, am was very busy. Loved always, bl

John Loving Iii

December 13, 2013 at 1:21 PM

sometimes it captures me also this beauty that God makes.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

December 13, 2013 at 10:15 AM

Wow! U are now master of poetry my lady. My apologies I saw ur wonderful suprise and I wz really touched just that there wz network prob that day so couldn't reply on ur blog but knw dat I really appreciate it and am soooooo happy to have u as a friend. Thanks so much for ur love,warmth,and encouraging comments-these have kept me on in this soup. Love u more than u can imagine my sweetdove. Alwaz, Based on Belief (A.K.A-Sir Bob,Baron of Ebullion,and defender of the holy sepulchre).

Russell Sivey

December 12, 2013 at 6:31 AM

This is such an awesome blend of beauty with peace my friend! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! You have amazed me with the splendor of this terrific piece! What a tremendous poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 12, 2013 at 4:46 AM

- Spectacular sunset !!! - Luck in contest my sweet friend Leonora ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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