Sunset

S un 
U rges all 
N egative things to
S top by 
E rasing all past 
T ragedies

S un go down
U pon all things
N ot pushing but,
S ubduing hands
E ntrapping them from my
T rophy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Nice one, valerie. DO a haiku one and enter the contest going on!
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