Sunset

behind the indigo mountain the sun goes down in a flourish ...of red ... and gold









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for Constance's contest 'Write it in one line, please'
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               Francine Roberts     08/09/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Irisha Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 12:54 PM
<3
Susan Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:51 PM
Beautiful imagery. congratulations on your win with this :)
Guzzi Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Thanks for all your kindness we have missed your haiku on facebook come back soon. light & love
Ramage Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 11:59 PM
Oh that would be beautiful to see. Congratulations on your win. Hope your family is well and safe, no repercussions from the earthquake. I think you said you were going to Tofino, one of my most favourite places in Canada. Take care. Lee
Ramsdale Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Wonderful imagery! Placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR
Poet Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Wonderful imagery here Francine..congrats on your win.
Horne Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Many congrats for all your wins, Francine : )
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Francine. Love, Carol
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!-----Lori
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,Francine
Sweetheart Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 12:17 AM
CONGRATS FRANCINE ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN WITH THIS VIBRANT MONOKU .. LOVELY ONE..
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 7:46 PM
So creative and expressive..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Constance's contest..Sara
Pickett Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Descriptive and very visual...Good Luck in the contest..God Bless.Taz
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 6:53 AM
Wonderful imagery here Francine...you are always highly inspired by nature ....very nice.
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