Sunset

I watched the sunset.
It fell underneath the sea.
It was beautiful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Great picture that you have painted...Sara
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January 23, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Good day Tori, the image is a beauty.. reminds me of the sunset ... in that movie 'Pirates of the Caribbean'..**at worlds end**.. they have the most beautiful sunset in that movie... and in one part if you pay attention.. the sun fell underneath the sea... and still woke up at the other end.. truly loved your haiku.. have a nice one,..p.d.
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