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Sunset

sunset in the west
dusk falls on an open field
fireflies light the way
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Watt Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 2:24 AM
This is magical, JC. I've been missing you around here, hope everything is all right. ~ John
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June 10, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Lovely vivid imagery in these three lines, JC. Fireflies often grace our inspiration. Regards // paul
Makama Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 9:46 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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June 2, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Very beautiful, JC! I love fireflies. They remind me of childhood summers :) xx Rhonda
Hawkens Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 3:24 PM
I was thinking of my childhood memories when I wrote this. Those were wonderful times. Thank you for this lovely comment.
Brul Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 12:58 AM
Spectacular !! I would love to witness such a sunset of that beauty. A gem to keep..To my faves.
Hawkens Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 5:20 AM
This is a fond memorable moments from my summer childhood. We would spend the days playing and picking Wild Blackberries for our mothers to make jam. And when the sun would set and dusk would start to settle we would walk among the Lighting bugs or Fireflies.
One Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Great imagery..
Hawkens Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 5:16 AM
Thank Silent One.
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:32 AM
Great image, JC
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May 28, 2020 at 5:15 AM
Thank Eve, your comments are most appreciated. Rhapsody of Poems finally came in. I just haven't decided yet if I want to read it or keep it as it is on my artist's easel for display. This being my first Poetry Soup poets poetry book. And the artwork is incredible. I may have to break down and purchase another just for reading.
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