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sunset in the west
dusk falls on an open field
fireflies light the way

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John Watt

Date: 7/2/2020 2:24:00 AM

This is magical, JC. I've been missing you around here, hope everything is all right. ~ John

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2020 7:26:00 AM

Lovely vivid imagery in these three lines, JC. Fireflies often grace our inspiration. Regards // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 9:46:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/2/2020 9:21:00 PM

Very beautiful, JC! I love fireflies. They remind me of childhood summers :) xx Rhonda

Jc Hawkens
Date: 6/6/2020 3:24:00 PM

I was thinking of my childhood memories when I wrote this. Those were wonderful times. Thank you for this lovely comment.

JCB Brul

Date: 5/26/2020 12:58:00 AM

Spectacular !! I would love to witness such a sunset of that beauty. A gem to keep..To my faves.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 5/28/2020 5:20:00 AM

This is a fond memorable moments from my summer childhood. We would spend the days playing and picking Wild Blackberries for our mothers to make jam. And when the sun would set and dusk would start to settle we would walk among the Lighting bugs or Fireflies.

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2020 5:28:00 PM

Great imagery..

Jc Hawkens
Date: 5/28/2020 5:16:00 AM

Thank Silent One.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/24/2020 12:32:00 AM

Great image, JC

Jc Hawkens
Date: 5/28/2020 5:15:00 AM

Thank Eve, your comments are most appreciated. Rhapsody of Poems finally came in. I just haven't decided yet if I want to read it or keep it as it is on my artist's easel for display. This being my first Poetry Soup poets poetry book. And the artwork is incredible. I may have to break down and purchase another just for reading.

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