Sunset

As it sets, the sun streaks the sky
   Cornucopia of festive ribbons on high

Emerald green, deep pink, aquamarine
   Heavenly canvas, blazing scene

Scant moments later, it's pale overhead
   Sunset vanished, its pigment bled... 

An earthly candle tapering down
   Flickers weakly toward the ground

When of a sudden its wan flame ignites
   A last burst of glory, surging bright 

Ere it collapses, a waxen pool
   Its fuel all spent; its demise so cruel...

So too, as our precious days slip away
   We sense the time has come to pay
      Our final call on this Earthly stage

We turn back time for one last grand stand
   Then hail the carriage of Death's Coachman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cholt Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 2:02 PM
A very fine poem indeed. I can see the Shakespeare influence. Nicely written.
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Whoa, W.A! I could die and go to heaven on the wings of this comment!! Thanks a zillion! :) Gershon
Sands Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Wow, very beautiful. Well written Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi. Appreciated. :) gw
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 4:42 AM
- A beautiful and deep poem, Gershon - "A last burst of glory, surging bright" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Thank you for your kind words and encouragement, Anne-Lise! :) gw
Cunningham Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Each sunset no matter how beautiful brings us closer to the grim reapers coach. We have to make the most of every day. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Couldn't agree with you more, Tom. Thank you for the observation. Best wishes, Gershon
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