Suns Wrath

solar flare-burst the sun throws its tantrum, a clean burn this time. irritating Sol’s not a good idea, he’ll hurl fire at Earth. spark his rage you’ll be sorry, he’ll do more than tan your hide.
5-16-2021 Surprise me Poetry Contest Line Gauthier
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Allison Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:31 PM
very clever ML especially tan your hide:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Clever! Aloha! Rico
Kiser Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Rico and have a great day!
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