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Sun's shadow

walking with the Earth
Sun blocks high charged cosmic rays
noble etiquette

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Mark Toney

January 15, 2025 at 10:33 AM

Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge (7), thriveni. Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Love the "noble etiquette." Good manners save lives! :)

thriveni c mysore

January 15, 2025 at 8:33 PM

Thank you dear poet for your precious time and challenges. I am glad the maths favored me this time! haha. It is a delight to be read by you dear poet, thank you. Cheers!

Sam Kauffman

August 13, 2024 at 11:00 AM

Oh I like this very much, Thriveni, with its blend of science imagery and poetic artistry! "Noble etiquette" indeed. Sending you blessings for your walk with the earth.

thriveni c mysore

August 13, 2024 at 8:48 PM

In spite of layers and layers of protection, we are not behaving well dear poet, that is sad. your visit brings me so much happiness, thank you for the blessings. you made my day. Cheers.