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Sun's shadow

walking with the Earth Sun blocks high charged cosmic rays noble etiquette

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Mark Toney

Date: 1/15/2025 10:33:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge (7), thriveni. Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Love the "noble etiquette." Good manners save lives! :)

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/15/2025 8:33:00 PM

Thank you dear poet for your precious time and challenges. I am glad the maths favored me this time! haha. It is a delight to be read by you dear poet, thank you. Cheers!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/13/2024 11:00:00 AM

Oh I like this very much, Thriveni, with its blend of science imagery and poetic artistry! "Noble etiquette" indeed. Sending you blessings for your walk with the earth.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/13/2024 8:48:00 PM

In spite of layers and layers of protection, we are not behaving well dear poet, that is sad. your visit brings me so much happiness, thank you for the blessings. you made my day. Cheers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2024 4:37:00 PM

love this personification. VERY nice

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/11/2024 7:00:00 PM

I am so glad to know you like this, thank you for your kind visit. Cheers.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2024 4:53:00 AM

Yes, very noble. I wonder how long it can carry on that task. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/11/2024 6:59:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit and thoughts dear poet. you said it well, for how long? Cheers.