Sun's Reflection

Sparkling water
underneath the bright light
sun swims the ocean.

02-28-15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tidd Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Nice
Bellen Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 1:48 PM
thanks my friend! :-)
Meade Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 9:11 PM
I always loved looking up through the water to see the sun . . . strong are his strokes!! 7
Bellen Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 6:21 PM
yeah I agree with you David, the works of nature is stunning..thanks for visiting, have a nice day ~charmane~
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 5:16 PM
beautiful imagery - great haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
Bellen Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 6:17 PM
thanks Jan! I took this picture of the ocean one early morning and while looking at it the idea just came up my mind.. :) it's just amazing.
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:55 AM
- Beautifully written Haiku, Charmane !! - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bellen Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 6:09 PM
thanks Anne Lise, you're so sweet, take care ~ charmane
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