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Sunrises Slowly

Pale cobalt blue 'pon horizon Lavender just above Fog coats the creek and pine forest Sunrises slowly, love The roosters sing their warm greetings Crickets chirp a morn's song Mourning Doves coo occasionally "Peace gives life~~ life prolongs" As the red fireball sun rises Casting red tinged cobalt 'Pon horizon's morn's whispy clouds The Dove coos don't halt There can be peace on this good earth If love rules in each heart Let love guide and depart never As the gold sun paints art Finis'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 4:55:00 AM
I am a great lover of nature and this poem takes me home. It engulfs my heart with what I love most. - This goes to my archives as FAVORITE.
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Date: 7/27/2013 3:18:00 PM
lovely write, my friend - I'm hunting the fog poem, lol
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:30:00 AM
nice poem.i enjoyed reading it. love the last lines .
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:12:00 PM
wonderful, Sara!
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:56:00 PM
I have just read this on a quiet evening Sara, I would like to congratulate you on the vista achieved here for us to join our imaginations to; such a beautiful write from you..'
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Date: 7/26/2013 9:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem adorned a natural beautiful picture, enjoyed a lot my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/25/2013 8:41:00 PM
I would love to see you try an actual Rengay poem my friend, but this one isn't an actual Rengay, at least not that I know of anyway! I believe the Rengay form is like a combination of a Haiku, Couplet, Haiku, Haiku, Couplet, and finally another Haiku! This is what I believe to be a Rengay! That's what I did whenever I wrote some! This aside, your poem it truly wonderful, a fabulous piece! You have successfully keep a high interest within this Poulter's Measure! You made me want to see more!!
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Date: 7/25/2013 6:51:00 PM
A lovely rhythm in this comely piece Sara.Loved reading this one from you today.
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Date: 7/25/2013 11:24:00 AM
beautiful piece Sara...I enjoyed the read
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