Sunrises' Radiant Warm Touch

Striated pastel clouds lay Nestled in hammock's soft white Luxurious comfort wait Sunrises' radiant touch
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Hammock Of Sky In Tanaga Written by: Sara Kendrick Date: September 3, 2012
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Davis Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Sara What a beautifully descriptive and calming write about this fabulous feat of nature. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Do Not Fear poem.
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September 15, 2012 at 11:12 PM
Sara, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Congrats on your win with your gorgeous poem here, Sara.
Mannan Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 3:12 AM
Many congrats sara for this lovely win.
Poet Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Beautiful verse here Sara!Congrats on your win!
Harper Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Sara, you are up early--I've seen the sky just like you describe, excellent. Congrat's on your win!
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September 12, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Sara! I love this beautiful image you created! Hugs, Rhonda
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September 12, 2012 at 10:22 AM
you slay me with the lyrical feel of your observations, sara... appluse to you for your win in my contest..:) huggs!
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September 12, 2012 at 9:36 AM
Ahhh what a nice place to be in !! Simply lovely image !! congrats on your winning placement.
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September 12, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara, this winners list is full of my fave poets, not all I admit but most of them .. xx
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Sara. Love, Carol
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September 12, 2012 at 5:21 AM
congrats Sara on an exceptional write and win for this interesting challenge luv ..
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September 12, 2012 at 1:24 AM
wow!! So lovely my dearest friend, Sara. this is one of the most awesome writes of yours which i've missed. MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!!! Thank you so much. luv and hugs, leonora
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September 4, 2012 at 6:29 AM
Beautiful, Sara! I love the the first line...striated pastel clouds...a lovely image. Hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 5:54 AM
oh, so THIS is the one you entered. Both your hammock poems are very nice, Sara!
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September 3, 2012 at 8:41 AM
I really love your excellent write my friend! You have successfully written a delightful and wondrous poem that enlightens the senses! I really enjoyed the line, "Striated pastel clouds lay" it sent chills through me of days I have spent looking at the clouds when I was younger and seen them just as you described Sara! Fantastic display of wonderful talent, Great Work!!
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