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Sunrise Soliloquy

__ the tropical shore waits birth of brand new morning… clouds pace heaven’s door __ one small speck of sun rises to the occasion… darkness sleeps soundly __ glory in the dawn… skies are feathered brightly with bird of paradise __ silhouetted palms wave windblown fronds in alarm… sun singes the bay __ the early morning wears a lavender halo… blue mist dressing gown ______________________ For P.D.'s Contest: "Sunrise"

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Date: 11/18/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a grand win for this Haiku of creative perfection luv..
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful lines Carrie. A joy to read. Congratulations
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:29:00 AM
CARRIE, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2011 7:01:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful haiku. Good luck in the contest. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)
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Date: 11/14/2011 10:45:00 PM
wow, I think you captured every picture and some of your images were kind of like mine. I really enjoyed these,Carrie. Love the line "feathered brightly" and "lavender halo" in the last one. oh, and where darkness sleeps soundly, that is ME not getting up early with the rising sun!!
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