Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Sunrise Soliloquy

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the tropical shore

waits birth of brand new morning…

clouds pace heaven’s door
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one small speck of sun

rises to the occasion…

darkness sleeps soundly
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glory in the dawn…

skies are feathered brightly with

bird of paradise

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silhouetted palms

wave windblown fronds in alarm…

sun singes the bay

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the early morning

wears a lavender halo…

blue mist dressing gown



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For P.D.'s Contest: "Sunrise"

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 18, 2011 at 3:52 PM Congrats Carrie on a grand win for this Haiku of creative perfection luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown November 18, 2011 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley November 18, 2011 at 8:31 AM Beautiful lines Carrie. A joy to read. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A November 18, 2011 at 2:29 AM CARRIE, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 15, 2011 at 7:01 AM Wow! Beautiful haiku. Good luck in the contest. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2011 at 10:45 PM wow, I think you captured every picture and some of your images were kind of like mine. I really enjoyed these,Carrie. Love the line "feathered brightly" and "lavender halo" in the last one. oh, and where darkness sleeps soundly, that is ME not getting up early with the rising sun!!