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Sunrise Haiku

first light skips across the water, iridescent footprints gleam in wake 11/15/11 Received 5th place in "sunrise haiku" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2013 7:45:00 PM

yes my contest.... you rock.. and I'm not really going to bed... :-) xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:35:00 AM

Hey, I am finally seeing your win for this one. Another great win, Susan. Congratulations.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/18/2011 5:26:00 PM

Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win!!! Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 3:45:00 PM

Congrats Susan on another super win for a perfect Haiku luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/18/2011 8:47:00 AM

Aww, loved the last line :) Soup mail, Susan.

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:40:00 AM

Well written Susan. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:27:00 AM

SUSAN, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 10:15:00 PM

you painted a pretty picture, Susan. I will have to go now and see if you wrote any other contest entries!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/17/2011 8:18:00 PM

Wonderful write with beautiful theme of Sunrise. Congrats for your win in Brian Strand's and other recent contests. Thanking you for giving me congratulation for my win in contests. Wish you sweet Good morning. bl

Date: 11/16/2011 5:15:00 PM

A beautiful sunrise haiku Susan, like the image you've created, enjoyed. Alexa

Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2011 12:26:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Susan. I'm gradually get the hang of these! Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : )

Date: 11/16/2011 11:59:00 AM

Nice use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Best wishes with your writing. Karen