Sunrise Haiku

first light skips across
the water, iridescent 
footprints gleam in wake


11/15/11
Received 5th place in "sunrise haiku" contest

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Date: 4/15/2013 7:45:00 PM
yes my contest.... you rock.. and I'm not really going to bed... :-) xox~ PD
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Date: 11/19/2011 8:35:00 AM
Hey, I am finally seeing your win for this one. Another great win, Susan. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/18/2011 5:26:00 PM
Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win!!! Love, iolanda
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Date: 11/18/2011 3:45:00 PM
Congrats Susan on another super win for a perfect Haiku luv..
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Date: 11/18/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:47:00 AM
Aww, loved the last line :) Soup mail, Susan.
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:40:00 AM
Well written Susan. Congratulations
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:27:00 AM
SUSAN, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2011 10:15:00 PM
you painted a pretty picture, Susan. I will have to go now and see if you wrote any other contest entries!
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:18:00 PM
Wonderful write with beautiful theme of Sunrise. Congrats for your win in Brian Strand's and other recent contests. Thanking you for giving me congratulation for my win in contests. Wish you sweet Good morning. bl
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Date: 11/16/2011 5:15:00 PM
A beautiful sunrise haiku Susan, like the image you've created, enjoyed. Alexa
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Date: 11/16/2011 12:26:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Susan. I'm gradually get the hang of these! Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : )
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Date: 11/16/2011 11:59:00 AM
Nice use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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