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Sunrise Haiku

first light skips across
the water, iridescent 
footprints gleam in wake


11/15/11
Received 5th place in "sunrise haiku" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2013 at 7:45 PM

yes my contest.... you rock.. and I'm not really going to bed... :-) xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

November 19, 2011 at 8:35 AM

Hey, I am finally seeing your win for this one. Another great win, Susan. Congratulations.

Iolanda Scripca

November 18, 2011 at 5:26 PM

Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win!!! Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 18, 2011 at 3:45 PM

Congrats Susan on another super win for a perfect Haiku luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 10:59 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

November 18, 2011 at 8:47 AM

Aww, loved the last line :) Soup mail, Susan.

Bob Quigley

November 18, 2011 at 8:40 AM

Well written Susan. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

November 18, 2011 at 2:27 AM

SUSAN, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2011 at 10:15 PM

you painted a pretty picture, Susan. I will have to go now and see if you wrote any other contest entries!

Bl Devnath

November 17, 2011 at 8:18 PM

Wonderful write with beautiful theme of Sunrise. Congrats for your win in Brian Strand's and other recent contests. Thanking you for giving me congratulation for my win in contests. Wish you sweet Good morning. bl