Sunrise At the Beach

sand pebbles sparkle
like tiny bright diamonds-
waves gently polish

Submitted for contest: One Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcgee Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 8:13 AM
So simple and your poem sparkles like bright diamond. Wonderful!
Kitchin Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 12:02 PM
Thank you Jeanne!
Dutta Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:24 AM
So nicely composed.Congrats.
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 4:30 PM
Thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:43 AM
A soothing write!
Kitchin Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Thank you Kim! :)
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 6:18 PM
A new "fav".
Kitchin Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Thank you! :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 1:34 PM
An astute observation and a brilliant description, Tania! All those pebbles on the beach have been polished by nature so they glisten. A lovely haiku. Hugs, Carolyn
Kitchin Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Thank you Carolyn! :)
Sergi Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 2:22 PM
A large description in a small haiku! My compliments!
Kitchin Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Thank you Ralph!:)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 9:13 AM
What a beautiful reflection of a moment on the beach captured in this delightful haiku! Just lovely! Hugs. Pandita
Kitchin Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Pandita! :)
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 6:21 AM
gorgeous imagery Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Jan! :) Hugs
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Lovely imagery, Tania. I can hear those morning waves
Kitchin Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Line! :)
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