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sunrise at the beach

sand pebbles sparkle like tiny bright diamonds- waves gently polish Submitted for contest: One Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Date: 6/24/2019 8:13:00 AM
So simple and your poem sparkles like bright diamond. Wonderful!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2019 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne!
Date: 6/12/2019 7:24:00 AM
So nicely composed.Congrats.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/12/2019 4:30:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/5/2019 6:43:00 AM
A soothing write!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2019 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Kim! :)
Date: 6/5/2019 1:42:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Great work! :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2019 4:25:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/30/2019 6:18:00 PM
A new "fav".
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2019 6:42:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 5/30/2019 1:34:00 PM
An astute observation and a brilliant description, Tania! All those pebbles on the beach have been polished by nature so they glisten. A lovely haiku. Hugs, Carolyn
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2019 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn! :)
Date: 5/29/2019 2:22:00 PM
A large description in a small haiku! My compliments!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2019 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Ralph!:)
Date: 5/29/2019 9:13:00 AM
What a beautiful reflection of a moment on the beach captured in this delightful haiku! Just lovely! Hugs. Pandita
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2019 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Pandita! :)
Date: 5/29/2019 6:21:00 AM
gorgeous imagery Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2019 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :) Hugs
Date: 5/28/2019 7:36:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Tania. I can hear those morning waves
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/28/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Line! :)