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Sunrise

sunrise on the sea
hearing the sound of the waves
my serenity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2012 7:02:00 PM
Waves are my favorite and sunrise so special, lovely!
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:54:00 PM
VERY lovely thought in this haiku, my friend!!
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:18:00 PM
lovely haiku, carol. enjoy reading your poems today.
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Date: 3/7/2012 3:19:00 PM
You've painted a lovely image with your words, Carol. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:37:00 AM
Great image and thought. LOve, daver
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:32:00 AM
Carol, I see this sunrise nearly every day and the waves really do bring me a sense of serenity. Come and visit! A beautiful haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:42:00 AM
nice peaceful imagery - i think the rhyme helps complete this feeling :)
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Date: 3/7/2012 8:17:00 AM
Yes - I do believe that is true. Lucilla
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