Sunrise

sunrise on the sea
hearing the sound of the waves
my serenity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harper Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Waves are my favorite and sunrise so special, lovely!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:54 PM
VERY lovely thought in this haiku, my friend!!
. Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:18 PM
lovely haiku, carol. enjoy reading your poems today.
Merryman Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 3:19 PM
You've painted a lovely image with your words, Carol. Love, Kim
Austin Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Great image and thought. LOve, daver
Devonshire Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Carol, I see this sunrise nearly every day and the waves really do bring me a sense of serenity. Come and visit! A beautiful haiku! Love, Carolyn
Susan Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 9:42 AM
nice peaceful imagery - i think the rhyme helps complete this feeling :)
Carrillo Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Yes - I do believe that is true. Lucilla
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