Sunrise

{For Tayemise} Do rise up like the sunshine grace, And bathe me with your luxuriant morning rays, So that my melancholy days, Will turn to joy always.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 12:16:00 PM

Afolabi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 4:19:00 PM

Afolabi, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing --------skat

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2015 7:38:00 PM

What a lovely write friend, I am so glad to dropped by to read this precious piece of yours.........A.M.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 9:17:00 AM

What a wonderful day I am having sitting here reading such amazing poetry. I am glad yours is amongst the ones I am enjoying reading today Afolabi. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you have an inspirational weekend. Love, Carol

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 2/10/2012 2:51:00 AM

Oh I do so hope that Taymise is always there Afolabi to bathe you in luxuriant sunlight. Lovely words Lizzie

Shirley Long

Date: 2/9/2012 10:01:00 PM

Great poem, I enjoyed reading it.