Sunrise

black scroll gently folds
gray pall shields the horizon
fiery embers blaze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 21, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Stephen,..what a great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.
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May 9, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Stephen. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Wonderful picture painted of the horizon with apt images, Stephen
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May 8, 2011 at 9:49 PM
Hey, I think this is VERY descriptive, and I love the scroll metaphor!
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May 8, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Special imagery surrounds these lines of Haiku Stephen.. a lovely vision ensues from your lines ..good luck if u enter in HG's contest...
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May 8, 2011 at 6:12 PM
great glimps of the horizon, wonderful poem..
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May 8, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Wonderful expression on the sunrise with nice images, Stephen
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