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Sunrise

black scroll gently folds gray pall shields the horizon fiery embers blaze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2011 10:17:00 AM
Stephen,..what a great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Stephen. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 6:09:00 AM
Wonderful picture painted of the horizon with apt images, Stephen
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:49:00 PM
Hey, I think this is VERY descriptive, and I love the scroll metaphor!
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Date: 5/8/2011 7:02:00 PM
Special imagery surrounds these lines of Haiku Stephen.. a lovely vision ensues from your lines ..good luck if u enter in HG's contest...
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:12:00 PM
great glimps of the horizon, wonderful poem..
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:04:00 PM
Wonderful expression on the sunrise with nice images, Stephen
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