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Sunrise


Smile while you can, with every given day.
Under this beautiful sky is your own paradise.
Nature welcomes you when you appreciate yourself.
Reach the top of your "Aura", don't fall into the emptiness.
Ignore the superficial and the bad vibrations.
Sacrifice your life squeezing the best of you.
Earth is the place we know, our heaven to be embraced to.
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Rolland Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 12:45 AM
so beautiful and caring words, enjoyed yann
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:09 AM
Thank you so much dear Yann.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 7:45 AM
I can never see the sunrise with so many tall buildings around me. A lovely poem that makes me yearn for sunrise. Ignore the superficial and the bad vibrations: great advice.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 11:05 AM
I thought in Malta you don't have very big buildings, but anyway, a sunrise is not easy to see in a city. Thank you my dear Victor for your visit. Have a nice day!
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Original and imaginative phrases written. I much appreciate the nostalgic reflection and the valuable guidance provided in your Acrostic. I thought your poetry to be delicately inspiring. Excellent job, Maria.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 12:43 AM
Thank you very much my dear Sotto. I appreciate it. Have a great Sunday!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Hello Maria, I have never seen the sun rise. i am sleeping. ir is a beautiful poem/ Hugs. My friend. xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Hello Maria, Oh thank you Maria. I appreciate our friendship to. I will be there for you as well my friend. I also appreciate you so much to. Lo9ve, Darlene yes when I have the chance i will look at the sunrise.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Please look at the sunrise because is there for you to look at. Love you very much my dear. I will always be there for you my friend. I appreciate you very much. Love/María
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