Sunrise

ocean of abstract
wildlife feed under moonlight~
starlet sun rises


8/17/2020

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Lindley Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Beautiful imagery, profound depths and inspiring haiku my friend. A fav... God bless...
Deepa Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Wonderful imagery Eve mam:-) Congratulations on your win... Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sunrise and the ocean go together. What a beautiful morning just like your write. Enjoy your win and day...............
Mcgee Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Congrats on your win Eve. love the first line especially.
Callus Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 1:10 AM
Even in an ocean of abstract there is beauty to be found, Eve! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
Kerr Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Hi Eve, Well done. Congratulations on your win with this superb entry Howard
Marc Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:17 PM
Congratulations on your #1 placement :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on your 1st place win!! A great haiku!!
Watt Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Eve, you are so gifted at this. Well deserved #1 win today, congratulations and hugs ~ John
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:14 PM
pretty poem Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:16 PM
oh what a beauty, Eve. WEll deserved first place win. Congratulations.
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 11:30 AM
I like your "starlet sun" Eve. Congratulations on your first place.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 11:29 AM
This one deserved first place, I am glad to see it arrived in the right spot.
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Eve, congratulations on your first place win, gorgeous imagery!
One Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 12:45 PM
Wow... This is brilliant.. great use of words, creating vivid imagery
Brul Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Wow, so lovely dear Eve! I love the use of starlet sun...So cute!!! A FAVE!!
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 12:53 PM
This is gorgeous Eve :)
Somadas Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 10:28 PM
ocean of abstract.. lovely imagery Eve..Good luck..
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