Sunrise

sun crimson blush of sky at edge of sea horizon erupts its reflection riding waves touching sand

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/28/2019 5:38:00 AM

You probably love the beach- this comes through so delicately in this one.

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/28/2019 6:19:00 AM

the beach is my happy place, especially at sunrise when very few people are up yet, you can enjoy the rare sightings of dolphins and enjoy the sounds of the ocean thank you for your read and comment :) hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/26/2019 9:57:00 AM

I love tropical writes.. for me it tells the story of the sea sand and sun...

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/26/2019 9:59:00 AM

Thank you...my best moments are those spent on the beach at sunrise, though i don't get their as often as i would like!