Sunny Goodbyes

summer bliss fades
blistering heat swept away
the crisp wind unfolds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 13, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Rashana and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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August 12, 2010 at 8:49 PM
A nice haiku on on summer is over. Good luck, Rashana
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