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Sunny Day

The naked sun my temperature rising gets me sweaty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 4:29:00 PM
Edwin, I think you are very good at forming a haiku. Love personification and metaphors in them, although I know some frown on it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:42:00 PM
Talk about hot days...heh. Excellent Haiku. I can relate to it.^.^ Always, Laura
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Date: 6/27/2011 12:23:00 PM
beautiful expression, Edwin. Here have around 96 in NC
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:05:00 AM
perfect Season for this perfect write Edwin luv.. good luck if for the contest... we are experiencing 100 plus degrees but I am luvin' it so.. hope u are well luv..
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