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Sunny Day

The naked sun
my temperature rising  
gets me sweaty

Copyright © Edwin Baldwin | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2011 at 4:29 PM

Edwin, I think you are very good at forming a haiku. Love personification and metaphors in them, although I know some frown on it. LUv, Andrea

Laura Breidenthal

July 1, 2011 at 4:42 PM

Talk about hot days...heh. Excellent Haiku. I can relate to it.^.^ Always, Laura

June 27, 2011 at 12:23 PM

beautiful expression, Edwin. Here have around 96 in NC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 27, 2011 at 8:05 AM

perfect Season for this perfect write Edwin luv.. good luck if for the contest... we are experiencing 100 plus degrees but I am luvin' it so.. hope u are well luv..

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