Notes About The Poem

08/09/24

Three stanzas, nine syllabus for each line

Rhyming scheme  :  aaa  ;   bbb  ;   ccc  .

SUNNY DAY

    Watch kaleidoscope of butterflies 
    on the bright sunny day at sunrise  ::
     Future good fortune to emphasize.

      Restless wings, butterflies to flutter.
      Bees groan among flowers in cluster .
     Blowing breeze kissing blossoms faster.

       Up above clear cerulean sky
        Eager egrets feel easy to fly.
        Open-air romance ! Lovers to try .
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Radice Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 1:07 PM
I really enjoyed your poem Alisha and was fascinated by the rhyme scheme you used here. I just had to Google it and it’s known as a triplet. Makes sense I guess. I learnt something new today thanks to your poem which, I must add, has a lovely calmness about it. And as I’m writing this I’ve just noticed in your notes that each line has 9 syllables as well. Nice one! Thanks for sharing! Cheers - Gary
Dutta Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Thanks for visit and appreciation. Blessings
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