Sunlight Warms

sunlight warms room 'pon
a winter afternoon...
dust layers exposed  

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Contest: Gathering Dust

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Skat A

February 28, 2015 at 9:38 PM

this is awesome..................SKAT

M. L. Kiser

February 25, 2015 at 3:07 PM

And in that dust are worlds within worlds...well, it does help to think of it that way, rather than fret about the dust showing. Love it!

Monterey Sirak

February 25, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Absolutely wonderful poetry. I well remember watching dust dance in sunlight streaming through a window, and watching my grandmother frantically try to get rid of it...no dust allowed to dance or lay around in her house.

Ravi Sathasivam

February 25, 2015 at 6:22 AM

Excellent. Love the imagery write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Shadow Hamilton

February 24, 2015 at 5:40 AM

so warming and very delightful Sara sorry for slow reply I was in hospital for several days and was still very unwell for a couple of weeks after I came out am slowly recovering hugs 7

David Meade

February 22, 2015 at 1:52 PM

Nicely done Sara -- the sun does expose the tiny particles that fill out lives. Much love and light. 7

Robert Lindley

February 22, 2015 at 1:49 PM

Early Spring wishes to you too.. Sun's warmth, sunlight thru windowpane, a taste of the promise of Spring and its renewing rain. A7 on this little gem my friend. Made me think of Spring!