Sunlight Warms

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sunlight warms room 'pon a winter afternoon... dust layers exposed Sponsor: John Lawless Contest: Gathering Dust

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Skat A

Date: 2/28/2015 9:38:00 PM

this is awesome..................SKAT

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/25/2015 3:07:00 PM

And in that dust are worlds within worlds...well, it does help to think of it that way, rather than fret about the dust showing. Love it!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/25/2015 8:01:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful poetry. I well remember watching dust dance in sunlight streaming through a window, and watching my grandmother frantically try to get rid of it...no dust allowed to dance or lay around in her house.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/25/2015 6:22:00 AM

Excellent. Love the imagery write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/24/2015 5:40:00 AM

so warming and very delightful Sara sorry for slow reply I was in hospital for several days and was still very unwell for a couple of weeks after I came out am slowly recovering hugs 7

David Meade

Date: 2/22/2015 1:52:00 PM

Nicely done Sara -- the sun does expose the tiny particles that fill out lives. Much love and light. 7

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/22/2015 1:49:00 PM

Early Spring wishes to you too.. Sun's warmth, sunlight thru windowpane, a taste of the promise of Spring and its renewing rain. A7 on this little gem my friend. Made me think of Spring!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2015 1:27:00 PM

love the imagery and the image Sara - great pen:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx