Joanna Daniel Poet Haiku

Sunlight and True Light - Lunes

 Sunlight (5-3-5 syllables)

Sunlight filters in
Shadows dance
Morning coffee smiles

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True Light (3-5-3 words)

Looking unto Jesus
The Light of the World
Forgiveness, peace, joy


10.23.2021



For William Kekaula's "Lune (mixed pair)" contest

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Jenna Logan October 24, 2021 at 3:20 AM Very adept at this comparison and contrast, Jo.

Christuraj Alex October 24, 2021 at 2:31 AM It's beautiful work. Taking deep into spiritual reflection and faith. Great imagery.

Vijay Pandit October 23, 2021 at 6:31 AM I like the way you described sunlight and true light. Imagery in the first stanza, inspiration in the second.

Victor Buhagiar October 22, 2021 at 10:37 PM Splendid. A heavenly contrast.