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Sunken Stone's A flat stone spent airborne, Skips a pool midst once known friends alludes in a dream, Prompts firstborn. Flaunts a symbol, Pivots your years amongst youths scheme, Nimble. Paves queue, Begs, alight theme, True. A flat stone spent airborne, Pivots your years amongst youths scheme, True. 2020 August 14 Let's Minichu on an innocent childhood memory ~~Mohan Chutani: Judged 2020 August 31

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Date: 8/31/2020 9:53:00 AM
I have done that and still do that! Fun and physics!! Congrats on your win!!!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/31/2020 12:19:00 PM
Thanks for your sharing, Krish, Aloha! William
Date: 8/31/2020 9:44:00 AM
William a wonderful Minichu. Would have been placed higher but for your title. Congrats on podium finish. Mohan
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Date: 8/31/2020 12:15:00 PM
Thanks for the opportunity, Aloha! William

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