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Sunken Eyes

A dull expression on her face Sure leaves one wondering What is within this lacking face Dark eyes, sunken feeling Lips seem parched needing some water Keeps the face desperate Eyes hollow, staring off beyond A look that’s desolate Maybe she’ll snap out of it soon For her funk is real bad She has a listless fortitude She’s awful just a tad
Form Poulters Measure Entrant into Rick Parise's "A New 8-12-line Poem - Any Subject" contest 2/23/2013

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Date: 2/24/2013 12:46:00 AM
I can really picture this girl from how you described her. Yes, that poulters measure . you do so many poems in different forms, Russell. Good for you! oh, thanks for your recent contest on the pill of life!!
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Date: 2/23/2013 4:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Winning material for the contest..The description reads as if this person is overworked, sick or depresses..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:07:00 PM
Russell; You did great with this poem. I had a face like that at one time. I even had a picture. Good luck in contest. Lucilla
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Date: 2/23/2013 1:09:00 PM
loved this clever write, Russell
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Date: 2/23/2013 11:17:00 AM
Wow.... I think I recognize that face !! Well done, Russell !!
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