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Night Fragrant Brassavola Orchid B. little stars image 0

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Image of Brassavola Orchid-B provided by Esty Sunflowers Stable hearts surrender to serendipitous sparkle specks of a night sky Usurped shone countenance of pleasant harmony midst rare moments Nocturnal moths whimsically flutter wings to stimulate dreamers rising Fragrance persuades noses of redolent sweet options like a pendulum Labor of timely instants for a day's warmth to diffuse the lathering oils Orchids at night relief odors that they are perfect to air, motions lovers Wished upon stars studded on a darken frame redolence pairs gesture Evocative aroma inches glistened lake as a moonglade o'er love ashore Rescues from zephyrs will, be enwrapped in materials or cuddled arms Satiate heart's content of a Night Orchid's pleasant servitude to amour 2021 May 26 *1st Place* Sunflower ~~Malabika Ray Choudhury: Judged 2021 May 31

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/1/2021 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful sunflower Acrostic write. Have a blessed day..............

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/1/2021 7:29:00 PM

Thank you, Paula, I acknowledge you with gladness my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/1/2021 10:30:00 AM

Aloha my friend. This acrostic is so rich in its language and its imagery. You have put us right into the scene - into the night and the scent! I vividly remember the scent of the night air in Hawaii. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/1/2021 7:27:00 PM

My lavender dendrobiums and purple cattleya orchids are aromatic when close-up, they're more picturesque thanks to my cousin, she tends to my garden for me. Thank you, Sam, again heartfelt words indeed, blessings be with you my friend, Aloha!