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SUNFLOWERS

Sunflowers

Stems that stretch out to reach warmth
Undulating in a dewy field
Nodding approval to passersby
Flowers that stand out, boasting huge blooms
Leaving lasting impressions
Our hearts keep these memories
When they fade in autumn’s chill
Each bloom scatters seeds
Replenishing the specie and ensuring their return when
Summer beckons once more



*May 21, 2021
For Malabika Ray Choudhury’s Sunflower contest
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Smith Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:54 AM
I see the flowers/ Smiling at me in the sun/ And I eat their seeds
Babcock Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on your win with this acoustic poem on sunflowers Carolyn. A gem. Hope your brother made a full recovery. love phyl
Horne Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 1:30 PM
a beautiful tribute to sunflowers - slugs & snails always eat my attempts
Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely sunflower write and picture. Have a blessed day......................
Mcconnell Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:16 PM
a lovely acrostic pen bringing out the beauty of the sunflower Carolyn, A rather fine piece indeed. Take care, Gordon
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. It's a beautiful poem ~ Mala
Flood Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:48 AM
Congratulations Carolyn. Sure sounds like sunflowers to me. Terry
Alex Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 11:26 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Y. Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Hi Carolyn, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful evening:-)Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. They make a lovely field and the seeds are delicious. Birds love them as well. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Callus Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Carolyn! You bring these flowers to life, and though I often see sunflowers when in season, my mind automatically takes me to Tuscany in Italy, where endless stretches of them can be so very pleasantly overwhelming! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
May Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 2:50 PM
I like the line: "nodding approval to passersby" Wonderful write Carolyn, best wishes
Mcintosh Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Beautiful. Love sunflowers :) God bless you always, Love, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:43 AM
The sight of seeing a huge field of blooming sunflowers whose faces follow the such is breathtaking. I love your poem exalting the gorgeous sunflower Carolyn. Beautiful! Blessings, Connie
Buhagiar Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Fantastic acrostic. I'll never forget the day I saw a field of dead sunflowers and wondered why they leave them there. I was told it was for their oil. Well written.
Daniel Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 9:00 PM
A lovely sunflowery acrostic, Carolyn:)
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 3:54 PM
this is so fantastic, Carolyn. Love it. Was gone all day, trying to learn new classroom procedures.I am so slow to get it. The new technology is gonna kill me.
J.T. Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Cool poem; -JT
Y. Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 1:49 PM
WoW! Carolyn, You penned such a gorgeous “sunflower” write. Your picture is lovely as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 1:26 PM
I love to see them in summertime Carolyn the way they stand majestically amongst the other flowers. Good luck in the contest and hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Alex Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Very Beautiful!
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Your poem is glowing in delight my friend ---as beautiful as the sunflowers it describes, Carolyn. Summer beckons!
Leffanta Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Well done! I can not imagine how yellow ever came to be associated with cowardice! Aloha! Rico
Sands Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 9:24 AM
It is nice to be led to this beautiful Acrostic today Carolyn. I can see them nodding! Well written :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thanks for reading, Heidi.
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 9:14 AM
what a gorgeous acrostic and picture, i grew mini sunflowers last year, i love the flowers the beautiful blooms always make me smile:) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Thanks, Jan. It's hard not to love a sunflower!
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