Sunflower of Night

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sunflower of night with petals washed in moonglow dreaming of the noon lavishly lovely wrapped in velvety darkness in summer's green hour the warm breezes blow riffling the golden petals milky way's twinkling

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Judy Ball

Date: 11/23/2021 1:50:00 PM

I grow sunflowers every summer and do love them. Nicely done Evelyn. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/23/2021 9:06:00 PM

Sunflowers are fun to grow and to look at. Thank you for your awesome comment. Blessings, Evelyn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/22/2021 6:11:00 PM

Interesting take on a 'sunflower,' Evelyn. We so often associate it only with daytime. But, of course, they're around at night, aren't they?! Flowers and Fragrance, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/22/2021 10:36:00 PM

Indeed they are, Gershon. And they look just as lovely. Thank you for your thoughts. Sunshine and Moonlight, Evelyn

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/20/2021 10:27:00 PM

Evelyn, you have created a beautiful haiku chain that is gorgeous. Your usage of two acronyms is rather interesting too. Blessings

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/21/2021 10:39:00 AM

Thank you for your delightful remarks, my friend.

Matt Caliri

Date: 11/20/2021 7:05:00 PM

Wonderful job on getting FIRST place in my Planet contest from 6 months ago. Sorry it took me so long! So many good ones to go through for one. Yours was fascinating with the double acronym, had never seen that before. Exquisite job!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/20/2021 9:06:00 PM

Thank you for this special honor and your kind words, Matt. No worries about the length of time the judging took. I know it's a complicated process, that not everyone can do. Your contest was engaging and fun. Happy holidays, Evelyn