Sunflower choir

They turn their faces upward.
Pivot in reverence from east to west.
Worship Ra the sun god.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 1:46 AM
I feel so warm reading this. It is amazing to me how you can put a few words together and make folks feel so good!
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 6:05 AM
LOL thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Timothy.
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:27 AM
Superb pen, Line. "Aummmmmmm"... Fantastic imagery in this one.
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Ashley Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Oh yes! Brilliant, enlivened imagery, Line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thanks, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Rose  Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 11:21 AM
I bet I can hear the hums all the way from here, yup, I do...(smile ) you got me thinking
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Pixie.
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 10:43 AM
They are beautiful flowers indeed, love to see them sway in the breeze. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Indeed, fields of sunflowers are very impressive. Thanks for your visit, Tom.
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