Sundown

Cirrocumulus 
      Beet root magic afterglow
               A parting climax
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Makama Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 3:19 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
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August 20, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Laura, .congrats... love ~SKAT~ :-)
A   Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Hey Laura, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD
Lamoureux Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 9:08 AM
I enjoyed the afterglow, congratulations.
Gasun Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend Laura. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 5:32 PM
how nicely done, for either sunset or cloud contest it could work!! long time no see, Laura.
Tacito Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Cirrocumulus, reaching for the skies...this was deep. Kudos on that cloud mention.
Anglesey Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Wow...excellent originality.
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 2:17 PM
- Good haiku, well done Laura. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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