Premiere Contest WinnerSunday Morning La Dehesa

A jerrybuilt jumble, so shoddy, diminished;
just cubes of grey concrete with windows and doors.
It started to crumble the day it was finished.
Franco’s “solution” for gypsies and moors.
 
It’s called “La Dehesa”, the pasture, the grange.
The old ones say once there were orchards here, too.
It’s undergone quite a formidable change:
there’s nothing but concrete obscuring the view.
 
Like rabbits in hutches we live in our flats,
with neighbours on both sides, below and above,
surrounded by dustbins and children and cats,
and noises of squabbling, noises of love.
 
Each Sunday, some woman (I can’t tell you where)
starts singing, as morning creeps in through the shutters.
Flamenco, like woodsmoke, just hangs in the air,
and laps over drainpipes and outlets and gutters.
 
She’s clearly a gypsy.  I can’t say I’ve seen her,
but singing is thoughtless, as easy as breathing,
and something about her, her aural demeanour,
is caught in her song, which comes seeping and seething
 
through windows and clothes lines, as if by osmosis.
She sings for herself.  She’s not grabbing attention.
There’s no petty ego.  Aesthetic hypnosis
is selfless.  Seduction, without condescension.
 
She sings of her pain and her ecstasy.  Both
can be borne on the air, like a children’s balloon.
Her art is unconscious, leguminous growth,
yet as hauntingly lovely as the light of the moon.
 
Gitanos, gitanas – delinquents and whores.
Well, maybe – but, seeing those ravishing eyes,
or hearing The Song as it wavers and soars,
I know in my soul where my sympathy lies.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Great write! Enjoyed every verse! Congratulations!
Coy Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 9:51 AM
Kim, it's great to hear from you - and thanks for the compliment! Michael
Sharma Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Great, congratulations.
Coy Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 10:50 PM
I'm very grateful to you.
Ashley Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Dear Michael, this is such a beautiful, poignant poetic portrait of an unseen but heard gypsy woman, whose "Flamenco, like woodsmoke, just hangs in the air,/and laps over drainpipes and outlets and gutters." Simply splendid! The entire poem is captivating and breathtaking! Beautiful rhymes, vivid imagery brings me to "La Dehesa" to hear "The Song as it wavers and soars". I adore the use of the word "leguminous" too :) Congratulations for your shining trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 9:40 PM
My goodness, Susan - you've done me proud, yet again! Thank you so much for another review that is rich in detail, clearly conceived with a poet's sensibility, and deeply flattering. I feel very much in your debt. Michael
Agustin Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Coy Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 3:09 AM
Thank you for your kind words.
Godwin Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:17 PM
Great poem, Michael, magical and talented pen, I think. Congratulations!
Coy Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 12:45 AM
You are so kind!
Toney Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 1:36 PM
Michael, you take us into a decaying Spanish housing project shoddily built under Franco’s regime, and reveal “some woman … clearly a gypsy … (her) singing is thoughtless, as easy as breathing.” “Her art is … hauntingly lovely as the light of the moon.” Art amid hardship. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your first place win on Mile 20 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 21 has already started. My Mile 20 Checkpoint blog post has your current standing.
Coy Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:08 PM
You really get it, Mark. 'Thank you' seems inadequate, but I am deeply grateful.
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