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Sunday, March 6

gray day, drizzle falls snow melts makes slush- cars splashing stay indoors and dry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 7:56:00 PM

Yep, you make us want to do just that, STAY indoors!! It's fun to paint pictures of certain miserable days, isn't it?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2011 12:10:00 PM

Very descriptive and expressive work...Enjoyed reading your creativity this afternoon..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 4:04:00 PM

I'm sorry you've been having such bad weather. It's been a very mild winter where I live in Florida. I think I turned heat on two or three times and not for the entire days. It's 72 now at night. I actually miss the snow. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 3:44:00 PM

I can feel your season angst, Carol. Have no fear, spring will soon be here. Enjoyed your haiku! Love, Carolyn

Dana Smith

Date: 3/6/2011 3:11:00 PM

I like this:) take care of yourself. Dana'lynn