Sunday, March 6

gray day, drizzle falls
snow melts makes slush- cars splashing
stay indoors and dry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 7:56 PM
Yep, you make us want to do just that, STAY indoors!! It's fun to paint pictures of certain miserable days, isn't it?
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work...Enjoyed reading your creativity this afternoon..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 4:04 PM
I'm sorry you've been having such bad weather. It's been a very mild winter where I live in Florida. I think I turned heat on two or three times and not for the entire days. It's 72 now at night. I actually miss the snow. Love, Carolyn
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March 6, 2011 at 3:44 PM
I can feel your season angst, Carol. Have no fear, spring will soon be here. Enjoyed your haiku! Love, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:11 PM
I like this:) take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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