Sundance

Long bright golden shafts,
Dance on vast verdant pastures:
Waltzing of the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:29 PM
I've only read your first three pieces, but I can tell already that I'm going to enjoy your work. My intention is to read them all, which will take some time. I'll comment as I go. Very nice work. Jack
Moreno Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:30 PM
Thank you
Culverhouse Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 8:30 PM
TGIF!! Enjoyed the write!
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 7:37 PM
I can see the scene..I see the sun waltzing across that pasture...Good luck if for a contest..Winning material for sure..Enjoyed..Sara
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