Sunburst Montage

In sunburst morning
Clouds drift on light wing
Focused sunrays pierce
Curtain and pane glass
Blaze a track to sun
My cold life I run. 

October 31, 2017.
Contest : Tableau Prints
Sponsor : nette onclaud
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Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 2:20 PM
subimal, wow, you painted my day with such glow... congrats on your top win and thanks for joining!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 11:19 PM
Thank you, Nette for appreciating and placing it in your contest.
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Well done, Subimal, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:33 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the contest, Subimal. Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:33 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Congrats on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:53 PM
AWESOME win, Subimal. BIG congrats to you.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Thank you, Andrea. And thank you once again for pointing out mismatch in the original title.
Michaels Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Lovely imagery, Subimal. Congrats on your First Place win! Regards, John.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:29 PM
Thank you, John.
Krampe Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Cozart Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Congrats on your win, Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, Dale.
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:12 AM
what a lovely interpretation of the image Subimal congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, Jan for your nice comments.
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 7:40 PM
GREAT title now!!!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Thank you so much Andrea for pointing out the mistake. I am not good at all in all these details and keep on making mistakes. Thanks once again.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Subimal, the first two lines are particularly beautiful. I think she said only a two word title. I saw a few others doing more than two words, so maybe she won't mind!!
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Very nice Subimal. I enjoyed this today :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 1:08 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I am glad you liked the poem.
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