Sunburst

Through broken mirror
Slender beams of warm daylight
Piercing the darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 16, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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April 16, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Congrats Christi on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an excellent view of the photo and a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie ...
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April 16, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Nice warm poem- Congrats on your win Christi
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April 16, 2010 at 1:48 AM
Christi, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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April 9, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Christi~ Nice Haiku good luck in the contest! I love the second line! Laura :)
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