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Sunburst

Through broken mirror Slender beams of warm daylight Piercing the darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 1:19:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:17:00 AM
Congrats Christi on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an excellent view of the photo and a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie ...
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Date: 4/16/2010 3:38:00 AM
Nice warm poem- Congrats on your win Christi
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:48:00 AM
Christi, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:10:00 PM
Christi~ Nice Haiku good luck in the contest! I love the second line! Laura :)
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