Sunburnt

Icarus mimicked; epidermis cremated; sympathy withheld.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Your haiku comes with a message and a warning, John. Many people still don't seem to realize how dangerous excessive exposure to the sun can be! Regards // paul
Michaels Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read one of my older submissions. Comments appreciated, as always!
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 4:00 PM
oh, yes, I can see it!!!
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