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Sunburnt

Icarus mimicked; epidermis cremated; sympathy withheld.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/8/2017 7:46:00 AM
Your haiku comes with a message and a warning, John. Many people still don't seem to realize how dangerous excessive exposure to the sun can be! Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read one of my older submissions. Comments appreciated, as always!
Date: 5/20/2014 4:00:00 PM
oh, yes, I can see it!!!
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