Danielle Lynn Poet I do not know?

Sunburn

Ouch don’t touch it hurts 
The sun slobbered on my face
The pain, all for the gain
Of a tan
Red in the face, it’s really a disgrace 
We ache, my sister and i
Ooooh the pain, all for the gain
Of a tan
Tender shoulders to the touch, 
We really weren’t asking for all that much
Ouch don’t touch, unless you’re brave
I’m liable to punch you in the face. 
All for the gain
Of a tan
This really hurts man! 
SO
DON’T
TOUCH!!!!
HA HA HA, we should really turn this into a game
What’s that you say little sis? 
Don’t make me touch your shoulder with a heavy hand
What wait what are you doing 
Haha I RAN!!!!!!!!!!!!
***love you little sis***

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Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2010 at 6:34 PM wow! someone has a sense of humor and someone does not. this sounds like something i would do, enjoyed,..p.d.

Joe Flach May 24, 2010 at 9:42 PM Sibblings! Aren't they great? Vengence is mine, sayeth the sister - I'll slap your burn when it begins to blister. Be careful in that sun - especially when you expose those parts that seldom see it. All for the gain of a tan. I enjoyed this poem of yours. It was a fun read. Thanks for sharing. Joe

Skat A May 24, 2010 at 8:21 PM OUCH! OUCH! FUNNY I HAVE ONE MYSELF. THAT IS CRUEL LEAVE YOUR LITTLE SIS ALONE. BETTER YET PICK ON HER, I LOVE PICKING ON MINE. LOVE IT DNAIELLE,,SKAT