Sunbeams

Sunbeams
Like gleaming gold dust floating in still air, sparkling sunbeams silently stream through bare, neglected, aging, cracked unpainted walls that from my childhood, I can so very vividly recall.
In delightful uninhibited childish glee, I try to grab hold of these lucid illusions persistently. But these artful dodgers expertly evade my eager grasps, like frightened fireflies they swiftly glide away from my obvious trap.
For now, that’s okay though, because in my daydreams I know that one day when I'm all grown up, I’ll magically capture them and fill my fairy cup.
Date: 7/27/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Staton Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Very well written!
Canama Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:06 AM
This is a great piece of inspirations... Congrats, Kika!
Ayala Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Hi Estela, I so very much appreciate your lovely compliments. All the best. Kika
Nunez Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:33 AM
I like this. A delightful write with an impish glee. Loved the last 2 lines most. Congratulations, Kika! Proud to join you on the list.
Ayala Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Hi KP, thank you so very much - I appreciate your compliments! All the best. Kika
A. Sharma Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Great pen! congrats on top place win Kika!
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Thanks very much, Dr. Sharma for your kind words. All the best. Kika
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Kika,, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Hi SKAT A, you are so kind to leave me your congratulations. Thanks. very much. Kika
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:39 PM
so full of beauty Kika congrats on win hugs
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Hi Shadow, I am very happy to place your highly in your contest. Thank you so very much. Kika
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:36 PM
such vivid imagery Kika many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so very much - I appreciate your compliments! All the best. Kika
A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 5:14 PM
KIKA:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Ah a very sweet poem Kika and I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.
Ayala Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Thank you dear Brenda for complimenting my work! All the best, Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations, Kika, on your great win! Well deserved with this beautiful piece with lovely imagery! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Thank you very much, Pandita. Kika
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Great imagery on the sunbeams, congrats, Kika
Ayala Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Dr. Ram, thank you kindly! Kika
Nance Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Grats on your win, keep filling your cup with magic, no matter how old you get ;)
Ayala Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Thank you Casarah for your kind compliments. Most of my pieces are based on my childhood memories and I try to keep the magic alive! Kika
A   Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Congratulations, KIKA , 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
Ayala Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, PD! I am ecstatic about this win! Have a nice weekend!
Davis Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Kika Words of enchantment and dreams that are full of hope. A journey of wonderment and faith. Thank you for the nice comment on my Back On Track poem
Ayala Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Robin. thank you so very much I appreciate your compliments!
Christensen Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Beautiful poem. So much light and magical! Thank you for reading my poem and leaving feedback.
Ayala Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Many thanks, Gry! Your comments mean a lot to me!
Lindley Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Amazing write.. Soft, sweet and well written! A fine contest entry and inspiring write as well! BBBRAVOOOO!!!
Ayala Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Robert, I really appreciate your kind words complimenting my work. Thanks very much!
Docherty Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:34 AM
What beautiful thoughts in a pretty poem... Enjoyed my stopping by today - ~Beautiful!
Ayala Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Hi Anna-Marie, thank you very much for your lovely compliments!
Ray Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:54 PM
Fairy cup -sounds cute, a cup filled with sumbeams - I know this one:D :http://ozoneparkjournal.com/poetry/about-great-tits-apie-zyles/
Ayala Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Thank you dear Emilija for your sweet compliments which I very much appreciate! Kika
Rashwan Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Wow.. Absolutely fantastic read! I love it! It's so bright! Looking forward for more!
Ayala Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:59 PM
My friend, Ahmed, thank you kindly for your wonderful comments and compliments. I will try my best to come up with some more:-)! Kika
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