sunbeams

 through kitchen window sunbeams bring dust particles to life

naturesunmonoku

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Howard Kerr

July 15, 2026 at 10:23 PM

An enchanting monoku, descriptive and detailed. It’s amazing how much one can include in a short form without sacrifying beauty. Excellent, Sara. Howard k

Sara Kendrick

July 16, 2026 at 4:26 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the uplifting review of my work. I am needing encouragement now for some reason. Sara K.

Jeanette Swan

December 4, 2025 at 2:10 AM

Love this image. I have memories of enjoying this phenomenon as a kid. Hope the bleak cold breaks into more sunbeams in your neighbourhood. J :)

Sara Kendrick

December 4, 2025 at 11:31 AM

It's a rainy day in the south today, Jeanette, but there is always hope of some sunshine. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

December 2, 2025 at 9:27 AM

Reveals them. Haha. Love this, Sara

Sara Kendrick

December 4, 2025 at 11:30 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea. Doesn't it reveal what we can't see. We are dazzled with the fact that so much dust is in the air for us to breathe in. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

November 29, 2025 at 8:16 AM

I enjoy reading your wonderful "sunbeams" Monoku write. Funny how that works. Great Picture, now close the curtains. Hahahaha!!!!! Have a wonderful/blessed day with hugs as you go writing away................

Sara Kendrick

November 29, 2025 at 11:23 AM

It makes me wonder exactly what am I breathing in? Thank you for your visit and nice review. Yes, I need to dim the sun so I can't see the dust. Sara K

Howard Kerr

November 28, 2025 at 10:15 PM

Great poems can be either long or short. You excel in both categories, Sara. This an example of it. You bring poetry to the door of the reader.with this imaginative Monoku. I truly value your review of Snowglobe Memories Mystic Howard

Sara Kendrick

November 29, 2025 at 4:55 AM

Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the visit to my page and taking time to read and comment. Sara K