Sunbeams

Seeping rays of light, Leaking through the cumulous; Beaming on the land.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:08:00 AM

Great painter with words ... tributes again

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/19/2009 9:02:00 PM

You have depicted in this short poem a very wonderful scenery-the rays of the sun. Thank for sharing. Ernilando

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:28:00 PM

Love those rays of light piercing through the clouds, amazing job.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/18/2009 1:02:00 PM

Love when the sun rays beam through the clouds. So beautiful Raul, you might as well have painted it. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/18/2009 7:54:00 AM

You caoture the image well Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/18/2009 6:17:00 AM

Here comes the sun! Nice haiku my friend; there has always been something special about the sun and its hability to leak into so many differente forms and menings; thanks for the experience =D and for the comments; of course I would love to join the contest, yei!!=D=D

Daniel Neal

Date: 5/17/2009 10:08:00 PM

Lovely image in this haiku. DN

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/17/2009 9:09:00 PM

A beautiful picture perfect image! Warming the world with those golden fingers. Lovely!