Sunbeams

Seeping rays of light,
Leaking through the cumulous;
Beaming on the land.

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L'Nass Shango

May 21, 2009 at 8:08 AM

Great painter with words ... tributes again

Ernilando Tugaff

May 19, 2009 at 9:02 PM

You have depicted in this short poem a very wonderful scenery-the rays of the sun. Thank for sharing. Ernilando

Elizabeth Neal

May 18, 2009 at 11:28 PM

Love those rays of light piercing through the clouds, amazing job.

Sharon Winter

May 18, 2009 at 1:02 PM

Love when the sun rays beam through the clouds. So beautiful Raul, you might as well have painted it. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

May 18, 2009 at 7:54 AM

You caoture the image well Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Cesar Cantu

May 18, 2009 at 6:17 AM

Here comes the sun! Nice haiku my friend; there has always been something special about the sun and its hability to leak into so many differente forms and menings; thanks for the experience =D and for the comments; of course I would love to join the contest, yei!!=D=D