Leng Mundoc Poet Verse

Sun Without a Rays

Bent knees on the ground 
When the world pulled me down
Face of mine turned into frown
Like I was lost in a crowd

Walking all alone,
Searching for unknown
Wanting what's best,
All I had were tests.

Victory was never mine
Though I kept on trying
So, I waited for the time
Until I got tired of trying

Maybe I'm destined in deep vain
Left with nothing gained
All my efforts gone astray
Like the sun lost its rays.

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Thomas Kourkoulis March 26, 2015 at 8:36 PM I hear in your poem that I fail when I try to be something that I'm not. Like you said:"all my efforts gone astray/like the sun list it's rays". Being myself takes no effort. Thanks for your poem! Leng Mundoc September 4, 2015 at 2:06 AM Your welcome. Have a lovely day fren.:)

Victoria Anderson-Throop March 26, 2015 at 2:01 AM desolation is a common human condition. i think it is difficult to write about, but you do very well. the image of a sun which lost its rays is a good one. Leng Mundoc March 26, 2015 at 6:52 AM Thank you for the compliment. It will help me move out of my shell and grow. I wish to do more and inspire. Thanks for the kind words. :)

Florin Andronic March 25, 2015 at 11:20 PM may the sun get some rays :) Leng Mundoc March 26, 2015 at 6:54 AM I hope so.:) thank you for passing by.