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Sun Through the Rain

Sun Through The Rain You're the greatest care giver you lift me up so high It's more than I've ever known and makes me want to cry Tears of joy of course for helping to ease my pain You make me see sun through the pouring rain While this world that we're in can be so cruel and cold Your beauty shines through and makes me want to hold Onto these moments where memories are made It's impossible to think these feelings will ever fade Away like a sunset saying goodbye to the sea I know that's something that won't ever worry me I love where we are and I'm excited to see Just what the future will bring with this heavenly lady

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/6/2014 11:33:00 PM
This is a very beautiful tribute to someone that cares deeply for you too! Is it a nurse possibly? I really appreciated the caregiver's heart you described in this poem! Write some more! It is the best medicine!
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Date: 1/25/2014 10:39:00 AM
Randy,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Randy Justus
Date: 1/30/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for the nice welcome! I am enjoying the time I've been able to spend on here so far.
Date: 1/24/2014 4:11:00 PM
Hello Randy, such a beautiful and deep poem. , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Randy Justus
Date: 1/30/2014 2:02:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words! I am still getting myself acquainted with Poetry Soup and I'm looking forward to posting and reading more poems on here.
Date: 1/24/2014 2:54:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Randy - I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Randy Justus
Date: 1/30/2014 1:59:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome! I look forward to posting more of my poems soon.

Book: Shattered Sighs