Sun Shrine
SUN SHRINE
beauty
still
mesmerises
& jostles
for perfection
thr
curious
stretch
ahead
the
innovative
energy
a magnetism
to
adore
pitched up
dilapidated
an image
of
primitive
simplicity
to seek
solace
in the excitement
of
otherworldly
light
its concept
stores
a
complex
of surprise
to delight
& inspire
a
rugged
natural beauty
of fond memories
of
the
unconventional
in attitudes
a revelation
ripe with
possibility
of self-discovery
&
interactions
to convey
stillness
rapidly growing
silence
is trying
to convey
peace
an appearance
petrified
at the forefront
so prominent
a trail
of
almost
seamless
tradition
forced
to make
the absence
inextricably
restless
so conducive
&liberated
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2022
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