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Sun Shrine

SUN SHRINE beauty still  mesmerises & jostles for perfection thr curious  stretch ahead the  innovative energy  a magnetism to   adore pitched up dilapidated an image  of  primitive simplicity to seek solace in the excitement of  otherworldly light its concept  stores a complex of surprise  to delight & inspire a rugged  natural beauty of fond memories of the unconventional in  attitudes a revelation ripe with  possibility of self-discovery &  interactions to convey  stillness  rapidly growing  silence is trying to convey peace an appearance petrified  at the forefront so  prominent  a trail of almost seamless  tradition  forced  to make the absence  inextricably restless so conducive &liberated NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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