Sun Shows Up Morning

sun shows up morning like face of a little dog brushing yellow sky

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/26/2015 3:16:00 PM

Rajat, this is such a lovely Haiku with amazing imagery. You're the master of Haiku, my friend! This deserves a solid "7". Hugs to you. Pandita.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/25/2015 8:17:00 PM

A warm sunny day can certainly put a smile on anyone's face... A very nice poem, Rajat :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/24/2015 8:19:00 AM

love the fact that you have likened the sun to a cute lil pup...a lovely write Rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/23/2015 7:01:00 AM

masterfully charming! Made me glow, dear Rajat!

David Meade

Date: 2/22/2015 1:57:00 PM

A master painter . . . skilled at painting the sky and all who dwell beneath her. Lovely dear friend. 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2015 1:51:00 PM

Creative work..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 2/22/2015 11:48:00 AM

I like the dog and sun comparison.so cute:)