Sun Shows Up Morning

sun shows up morning
like face of a little dog
brushing yellow sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Rajat, this is such a lovely Haiku with amazing imagery. You're the master of Haiku, my friend! This deserves a solid "7". Hugs to you. Pandita.
Deschler Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:17 PM
A warm sunny day can certainly put a smile on anyone's face... A very nice poem, Rajat :)
Relish Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 8:19 AM
love the fact that you have likened the sun to a cute lil pup...a lovely write Rajat
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:01 AM
masterfully charming! Made me glow, dear Rajat!
Meade Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 1:57 PM
A master painter . . . skilled at painting the sky and all who dwell beneath her. Lovely dear friend. 7
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 1:51 PM
Creative work..Enjoyed reading today..Sara
Hunjeri Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 11:48 AM
I like the dog and sun comparison.so cute:)
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