Sun Shinning

sun shinning sipping coffee on the swing

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/30/2012 7:20:00 PM

sounds relaxing...nice ku...congrats on being selected!

Daver Austin

Date: 10/30/2012 12:26:00 PM

NIce, Rhonda. Wish I could join you. Congrats on the selection. daver

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 10/30/2012 2:16:00 AM

As a lover of haiku, I especially like this. Check mine, if you can. Can I post it on my blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr, please?

David Smalling

Date: 4/17/2009 3:01:00 PM

I feel it, the high life, and the free spirit ... beautiful!

Date: 4/17/2009 2:04:00 PM

Wonderful use of alliteration to give this piece rhythm. Now sipping coffee is a wonderful thought for me as my cup sits at my side while I type this. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2009 1:18:00 PM

A relaxed feeling it is, nice job Rhonda...Raul

James Faulkner

Date: 4/17/2009 7:59:00 AM

lol. a huge smile came over my face when i read this. love the imagery and feel - love and peac:james

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2009 6:28:00 AM

Love the feel of this one!!! Think I'll go take my morning cup outside! :)

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/17/2009 6:13:00 AM

Beautiful indeed. How about....the sun shining bright (5cylb), while sipping turkish coffee(7cylb), on the smiling swing (5clb). Please re-entry you beatiful haiku...splendor...you can enter in under spring's contest. All the best.