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Sun Shinning

sun shinning 
sipping coffee
on the swing

happinesshaiku

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Sandra Adams

October 30, 2012 at 7:20 PM

sounds relaxing...nice ku...congrats on being selected!

Daver Austin

October 30, 2012 at 12:26 PM

NIce, Rhonda. Wish I could join you. Congrats on the selection. daver

Vassilis Comporozos

October 30, 2012 at 2:16 AM

As a lover of haiku, I especially like this. Check mine, if you can. Can I post it on my blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr, please?

David Smalling

April 17, 2009 at 3:01 PM

I feel it, the high life, and the free spirit ... beautiful!

April 17, 2009 at 2:04 PM

Wonderful use of alliteration to give this piece rhythm. Now sipping coffee is a wonderful thought for me as my cup sits at my side while I type this. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Raul Moreno

April 17, 2009 at 1:18 PM

A relaxed feeling it is, nice job Rhonda...Raul

James Faulkner

April 17, 2009 at 7:59 AM

lol. a huge smile came over my face when i read this. love the imagery and feel - love and peac:james

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2009 at 6:28 AM

Love the feel of this one!!! Think I'll go take my morning cup outside! :)

Nadia Shahwan

April 17, 2009 at 6:13 AM

Beautiful indeed. How about....the sun shining bright (5cylb), while sipping turkish coffee(7cylb), on the smiling swing (5clb). Please re-entry you beatiful haiku...splendor...you can enter in under spring's contest. All the best.

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